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Simile, metaphor or personification? A 2-minute guide

You don't need a list of twenty technical terms. These three come up all the time, and you can spot them with a simple test.

Simile

A simile compares two things using "like" or "as".

  • He ran like a startled deer.
  • Her smile was as bright as the sun.

The test: can you see the word like or as doing the comparing? Then it's a simile.

Metaphor

A metaphor says one thing is another thing.

  • Her eyes were diamonds.
  • Time is a thief.

The test: the writer says it is the other thing, with no like or as.

Personification

Personification gives a non-human thing a human action or feeling.

  • The wind whispered through the trees.
  • The old house groaned in the storm.

The test: can only a person do that? Whispering, groaning, smiling, sleeping. If a thing is doing it, that's personification.

Don't stop at the name

Naming the technique is only half the job. Always add what it does: what idea it suggests, or how it makes the reader feel.

"The wind whispered" is personification. It makes the wind sound gentle and secretive, so the scene feels quiet and a little mysterious.

Try it now

Can you spot which one it is?

One line, one word

The rain was lashing down.

What does 'lashing' suggest here?

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